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Introduction
Web Writing Is Hyperlinked
Organizing Web Copy
Web Writing Is Compressed
The Interactive Script
Varied Approaches
Introduction
The proliferation of the Internet and of commercial websites has
brought with it a need for web-based communication. The writer is
central to effective web communication, and the writer must be
aware of certain characteristics that make web writing different
from other kinds of writing. Web writing—just like brochure
writing and video writing—has its own set of forms and
conventions. This being said, good web writing is like any other
good writing in terms of the need to express ideas clearly and with
purpose.
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Web Writing Is Hyperlinked
The principal difference writers must address when writing for
the web is that web writing is “hyperlinked,” which
means that it is not linear with a starting point and an ending
point. This makes web writing different from other media writing,
in which the writer determines the flow of the copy and information
from beginning to end. On websites, readers direct themselves
through the copy on various web pages by clicking on textual or
graphical elements. These linking elements are referred to as
navigational elements, hyperlinks, or simply
links.
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Organizing Web Copy
Writing in a hyperlinked environment presents the writer with a
special set of organizational challenges. These challenges involve
writing copy for separate web pages and the links on these pages,
and understanding how all of the copy and links fit together as a
whole.
Good website organization is essential. Good organization gives
readers the ability to easily navigate among the web copy and
hyperlinks, and to understand where they are on the website at any
given moment. Before a website is written, designed, and placed on
the Internet, the creators of the website develop a navigation map,
which depicts the number of web pages on the website and how these web pages are linked to one another.
To illustrate, here is a partial navigation map for a website I
wrote for the financial services firm Standard Management:

Explanation
- A complete and accurate navigation map is crucial for
developing a website. Websites should be thoroughly planned before
writing, development, and final design begin. Changing a website
schema in midstream can cause serious organizational and budgetary
problems. For identification, each web page is assigned a name and
a number, and each piece of copy is accounted for on the navigation
map.
- Using a military numbering system like the one shown here is
extremely effective. When I am speaking with a graphic artist or
technical developer or vice versa, it is much clearer and more
efficient to refer to page “one dot four” than it is to
say, “you know, off of the main page, the page with the
biographies on it, the one with Pete Pheffer’s
biography.”
- The navigation map above shows how web pages link to one
another. For example, a web user going to Standard
Management’s corporate home page sees web page 0.0. There is
copy on this web page along with links (indicated by carets) to
pages 1.0, 2.0, 3.0, and 4.0. These web pages, in turn, include
copy relating to corporate executives, human resources, community
relations, and testimonials.
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Web Writing Is Compressed
Web copy tends to be very tightly and concisely written. There
are several reasons for this:
- People read differently on screen than they do on paper. Short
paragraphs and short copy in general are easier to comprehend and
absorb on screen than is long copy.
- Computer screens are only so deep, and only so much copy is
visible without readers having to scroll. Copy that is visible on
screen without having to scroll is said to be in the
“non-scrolling area.” It is a good idea to keep important copy concise and visible in the non-scrolling area.
- Besides the text on the web page, copy is also required
for navigational buttons and other navigational links. There is
little space on these links to write, which means that linking-copy
has to be very concise. While it is extremely concise, linking-copy
must at the same time give readers a crystal-clear idea of where
the links lead to on the website.
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The Interactive Script
When I write web copy, I use a certain script format to
accommodate the Internet medium and its special requirements.
Following is the interactive script I wrote for web page 0.0:
Here is the web page that was created using this copy, followed
by points explaining how web copy is planned and then realized on a
web page.

Explanation
- Target audience. As is true in any other type of communication,
having a clear picture of the target audience is important when
writing for the web. The target audiences for this web page were
insurance agents and financial analysts.
- Tone. Keeping the target audiences in mind, I wanted to project
a tone of confidence, clearheaded self-assurance, and forward
thinking.
- Copy. The copy focused on the company’s strength,
expertise, accomplishments, results, and vision for the
future.
- Links. Links to other sections of the Standard Management
website were embedded in the copy. On the interactive script, I
indicated which copy was linked to other areas of the website.
- Typography. On the interactive script, I suggested some
typographical approaches to the graphic artist. When I collaborate
with a graphic artist, I always present my graphical ideas as just
that—ideas. I do not want to encroach on the graphic
artist’s prerogatives. In this case, I suggested the relative
sizes of type in the headline at the top of the web page. I also
suggested that we emphasize phrases or sentences at the top of each
web page. The graphic artist decided to do this by using red
type.
- Change. Web pages change. Companies alter web pages to reflect
the advancement of time, changes in products and services, and new
corporate and product branding. In the case of web page 0.0 shown
above, Standard Management changed the copy in the second and third
paragraphs to reflect current conditions, after I first wrote the
web page. The words ten years were changed to 12
years; $1 billion today was changed to $1.5
billion today; and 65-year-old flagship company was
changed to 67-year-old flagship company.
- Approvals. I slug each page in the interactive script to
indicate whether copy is in draft or final form. I have also found
it helpful to clearly indicate whether copy has been approved by
relevant parties like marketing managers, human resources managers,
and company lawyers. Sometimes, legal counsel asks for changes
involving things like product claims and trademarks.
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Varied Approaches
The following examples show how the tone and editorial content
of web pages vary to meet different kinds of communication
needs.
Here are the web pages that were created using this copy,
followed by some explanatory points.


Explanation
- Web writing is sometimes derivative of other forms. For
example, the Boy’s Club piece on web page 3.1 was written as
a feature story, and its form as a feature was similar to what a
reader might see in a newspaper. The difference was in its length.
Because I was writing for the web, I wrote the story shorter than I
would have written it as a newspaper feature. At the same time, I
had to make sure that the story had a beginning and an ending;
struck an emotional chord; and positioned Standard Management as a
caring company.
- Speaking of the derivative aspects of web writing, the
interactive script format I developed is based on the video script
format. Instead of visuals on the left and audio on the right, I
place copy directions on the left and the copy itself on the
right.
- Differences in approach between the Standard Management
corporate home page (web page 0.0), and the pages dealing with
Standard Management’s community-relations activities (web
pages 3.0 and 3.1), are worth noting. The corporate home page uses
facts and a logical appeal to help readers see the company’s
clarity of thought and purpose. On the other hand, the
community-relations pages use an emotional appeal to help people
see that Standard Management has a clear mind, but it also has a
caring heart.
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